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Clemson, I agree, but I also know why it works. It’s not the way I do things. M

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As a reader, I find I'm serioiusly put off by the current machine-gun style of writing, with its long strings of choppy, one-sentence paragraphs. If this is truly the best way to catch and keep a readership, I say it's spinach and I say to hell with it. Who needs readers that shallow?

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